PC-Running on ice

YOU ASKED FOR IT DADDY

Vision- 4 stars

As always, great job! You conveyed the pose nicely, he/she looks decidedly exhausted, (I can imagine that running around on the ice isn't exactly an enjoyable experience for a dog, my pug cut her paw pad on some ice last time it snowed here.)
yet determined. And he does have that awkward posture that dogs tend to get on ice. The background, however, doesn't seem like you put too much effort into it. I would have added more texture to the ice, and maybe added some land in the distance.

Originality- 4.5 stars

Definitely the first picture of a dog running on ice that I have seen so far, but I think you could have used a more interesting angle, and added more space in the bg.

Technique- 3.5 stars

Lovely line and coloring work, as always :3 You can't see the shading to well, but you noted that in the description, so I won't go into that. However, I would recommend adding some highlights. As for anatomy, the second toe on the front paw facing us seems too long, I would shorten it a bit. Also, I think you need to work on your rear legs, and studt the joints back there, the top half seems like a random blop, it could be more defined. Also, the hump on the back is too far back, it's caused by the shoulder blade sticking out above the spine, but here you drew it like, halfway down the back. I would try referencing skeletons as well as photos, it really helps with anatomy.

Impact- 3.5 stars

I really like the concept, and the pose is quite nice. I also live how you do eyes and noses, you capture the uhh... shininess very well. This is a neat picture, good work.

Hope I helped!